Essay by:
Sarah Kirby
Emporia State University

It’s true our nation is currently suffering from an extreme financial crisis. It seems as though the crisis could be blamed on countless itineraries of different leaders in the country and the events that have taken place over the last decade. Some individuals believe that our economic issues derived solely from the war while others view it as only a problem created by greedy mortgage collectors and still some individuals don’t even believe that America is struggling. Although America is in a recession it seems to not be as intense as intense as the depression of the 1930’s and although it is not, it’s important to acknowledge that if something is not done about our economic issues America could potentially, and very soon go back into a stasis much like the depression of the 1930’s if not something even worse. In order to defer this from happening, some reforms need to be made in order to create financial and economical stability and create a healthier future for America’s finances. The best reform to attain this goal is to give to Americans, create green jobs and bail out GM. 

                The first step in attaining economic stability is pull out of the war in Iraq. Everyday that America takes part in the war we increase the national debt not by hundreds or thousands but 100’s of thousands.  American business also need to quite outsourcing jobs. Everyday that jobs are outsourced overseas American corporations are only contributing to the unemployment rate. Congress should also be providing major tax increases to those company’s that are outsourcing and as an incentive give those companies that are not outsourcing major tax breaks because they are keeping jobs and employment opportunities in America. In addition the government should bail out companies like GM and Chrysler, all of those automobile companies in Detroit because they contain such a high index of jobs that are in America. Although, they are doing poorly it’s necessary and essential that America have some company that is making those types of machines in America because it helps with oversea shipping cost and provides America with definite forms of transportation if there were to be a crisis of some sort.  The motor companies of Detroit are also the center of the huge metropolitan area and are the building block for that cities mentality and family structure. Taking away those factories will destroy the entire cities makeup or jobs and services.

                Increasing green jobs is essential for restoring a healthier economy. America needs to increase the amount of transmission lines in the nation. Increasing transmission lines will increase how much and how fast we can transport electricity, it will also help to create jobs. By completely rebuilding or adding on to the electrical grid in America, the nation can be more efficient. Right now the nation can not move electricity fast enough, thus it then has to burn natural gas and coal. This also forces green energy saving resources, such as windmills, to be turned off because the electric lines either can’t transport the electricity fast enough or there is no where else for the electricity to go. The government could inevitably sell to Canada the extra electricity we had, that is if there were transmission lines connected to Canada, to help pay off the national debt. Once the transmission lines had been built, America could then build even more greener energy saving alternatives and continue to try and become as energy- efficient a nation as possible.  Also America would need to step up the research and production of federal electric sells and it all needs to be done in the U.S. and not in China.

                The federal government should give money to American’s and not bail out the financial companies like Morgan Stanley. For example if you give $10,000 to every American they will do one of four things with the money. They will pay off credit cards, pay off home loans, invest or buy a color TV or some personal item. Homeowners who are in debt should pay off the bank’s first thus meaning that eventually the banks will receive the money they need to counter balance all of the mortgage loans that are putting them in debt. It would also be a stimulate package to small businesses and homeowners trying to do there own thing.  Also to tie into the idea of companies like Morgan Stanley, I think that should be more corporate responsibilities and the CEO’s should be getting very little money. No bonus or raises for upper management in those struggling corporations. Needless to say there are endless possibilities to solving the financial crisis however, these suggestions are solid enough that they would truly make an impact and help the America towards economic stability.




Re: Keep it in the Country

Hey Sarah!

I thought that the topics you covered in your essay were very important. I also believe that your three main points need to be considered by our American people as well as the government. We do need to pull out the war in Iraq to help our economic stability because we are very disfunctional in todays society. I also liked your point of increasing green jobs for a healthier economy. These changes would be very helpful.

Great Job!

Whitney Franklin


Re: Keep it in the Country

Sarah,

It is definitely important to keep in mind that without solutions to our current national debt, occurrences such as the financial calamity that took place during the Great Depression could certainly occur again. I respect your priority on not only helping the economy, but the environment as well. It would certainly be a great way to solve two of our tribulations.

-Amber Vanderhofe


Re: Keep it in the Country

Sarah,
This is a well written essay. It kept my attention from the beginning, and I felt as though you had a lot of good points. I liked how you divided it up so that is was really easy to follow. Good work.

Morgan Pearson


Re: Keep it in the Country

I really enjoyed reading your essay. you had some great points that need to be thought about. your essay was well written and easy to follow. when you talked about pulling out with the iraqi war, I completely agree. I think that the war is definitly contributing to our crisis. good job

Kelsey C.


Re: Keep it in the Country

Sarah,
You obviously put a lot of effort into this paper. You addressed many of the primary contributors to our ever-rising debt and you gave some very helpful options our government could take to reduce the stress of the debt (such as pulling out of Iraq). Great Job!!
-Brandon Rich


Re: Keep it in the Country

Sarah,

I think your essay is really good. I like your opinions on the war. I also like your opinions on increasing green jobs. I had not yet read an essay with thoughts on that topic. You had some really great justifications behind all of your opinions. Your main goal to get across people was that there is change that needs to be done and I agree with you 100%

Ashley Goodloe


Re: Keep it in the Country

Very well thought out essay. You examined our fiscal problems here in the United States and even presented viable options as solutions and I cannot appreciate this more because viewing this objectively, I am happy to see that solutions by American's such as yourself, are being presented, and that only inspires one thing in me: hope.

Good job.

-Gabe Moyer


Re: Keep it in the Country

In a perfect world the government would give every American $10,000 but then agian in a perfect world our nation wouldn't be having finacial problems. I don't think that giving Americans money will help the country's financial problems. I do agree that CEO's should get paid less. Nice job on bringing up a lot of different issues with our government.


Re: Keep it in the Country

I agree with all you have brought up, you have touched alot of issues. However, my dad being an ex marine sais he is agaist needless war but troops in small number are needed in some countries to "keep an eye on thing" kinda like babysitting so nothing happens to the US. If we get rid of too many troops all at once without having a stable economy with jobs available, that will just lead to more unemployed persons, using not only government financial assistance but healthcare as well, or they will have no means whatso ever to provide for their families or no means to spend money to keep cash flowing here. This is just one other avenue to look at. But overall good insight.

Angela Cooper


Re: Keep it in the Country

Sarah

I really liked the topics you chose and I do agree that not only would it be eco friendly to have green jobs, but there would be a good chance that it would help our economy!!!

Whitney Cates
Emporia State University


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